In conclusion, - Transition phrase signalling the end of the essay, there are various physical and mental effects of television on children. - Restatement of thesis, The physical impacts on kids are obesity and serious problems with reduced fitness. - Summary of major ideas from Body Paragraph 1, Additionally, - Transition signal, the mental effects can include a fear of violence as well as a distorted sense of reality. - Summary of major ideas from Body Paragraph 2, Therefore, - Transition signal to signal the final comment, parents need to monitor and decrease the amount of time their children spend watching TV in order to spend more time doing physical activities outdoors for better health outcomes. - Final comment - recommendation,

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