Jared said it was meant to be a bit of fun, he said it's not far from home. - Comma splice!, I breathed heavily as I saw the scissors and knives they were like torture weapons. - Run on sentence!, I stumbled towards the looming hospital, the noise of cars faded. - Comma splice!, Even though I didn't want to I anxiously followed Jarred as he marched into the operating theatre. - Missing comma for independent clause!, Pointing my quivering finger towards a human skeleton I screamed. - Missing comma for independent clause!, Finally we were in. - Missing comma for independent clause!, It was freezing my hands were shaking. - Run on sentence!, Far across the room I saw a weird skeleton wearing a hospital dress covered in blood. - Missing commas for independent clauses!, I followed Jared gingerly he said this would be a good idea. - Run on sentence!, When I looked behind me in a sitting position was the skeleton. - Missing comma for independent clause!, Shattered pieces of glass were everywhere, my feet scrunched through the pieces of glass.have large nostrils. - Comma splice!, I was following Jared, I felt a whisper of cold air. - Comma splice!, I followed Jared down the ladder, I gingerly tiptoed across the room. - Comma splice!, As I edged towards it I noticed that it was clutching an old patched leather diary. - Missing commas for clauses and a list!,

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