Without hesitation, Tom sprang into action and called the police., Then, he continued peeping from a corner and witnessed the burglar turning the house topsy-turvy to find all the cash and valuables., Just then, his mobile phone rang! The burglar stopped dead in his tracks and spun around., "Oh no! He saw me!" Tom thought., Absolutely petrified, Tom sprinted off as fast as he could., Looking over his shoulder, he spotted the burglar not far behind him and his heart palpitated with fear., While Tom was fleeing from the burglar, he heard the wailing sirens of the police car in the distance., He was ecstatic with joy! "I am saved!" Tom cheered in delight., To his horror, the minute he stopped running, the robber charged towards him and brandished a blade., He bellowed, "You had better stop shouting! If not, you will get it from me!" , Beads of perspiration trickled down Tom's forehead as he felt the cold blade pressed against his neck., Not daring to utter a word, Tom meekly complied with the burglar's demand., Seeing the police approaching, the desperate burglar hollered out loud, "If you come any nearer, he will die in my hands!",

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