Topic Sentence: Overfishing is a major problem., Exercise is extremely important to our lives, Mobile phones are making our lives too difficult., The elephant is at danger of becoming extinct., Wearing a school uniform is the best way to ensure everyone is equal., Example: For example, older people benefit from social groups to help them feel happy., Almost 5 million fish are caught by fisherman in the Atlantic everyday., 78% of students agreed that school uniform helps them to focus more on school work., For example, mobile phones affected teenagers' ability to learn effectively in school., For example, "Abel could not live without the ocean., Explanation: This highlights the number of people who simply do not know how to communicate with others., This shows that more teenagers are affected by the number of hours spent on their phones., This means that many creatures in the ocean are endangered., This highlights the way that uniform can create equality amongst students., This shows that Abel is very close to his mother and trusts her completely., Link: In conclusion, respecting others is the only way we can understand different cultures., Therefore, it is vital that we deal with the problem of overfishing., In conclusion, mobile phones need to be monitored by parents to prevent teenagers becoming addicted., Finally, exercise is essential to make sure we have healthy and happy lives., Therefore, we need to protect our oceans to protect our own futures.,

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