"Oh no! No more eggs! Now I'll need to run to the provision shop to get some, " I grumbled peevishly as I stomped to the living room to get my keys and purse., On a humid afternoon, the neighbourhood was mostly deserted, and the corridors were empty., I had been busy preparing lunch in the kitchen when I realised I had to make a trip to the provision shop, making me terribly annoyed., "Tom would be so disappointed if I did not prepare the soup!" I thought., Leaving the kettle on the stove, I left the house hurriedly., " I will be very quick. Nothing is going to happen," I thought., My five-year-old son was still sleeping in his room then., As I was walking home from the provision shop, I was terror-stricken as I stood rooted to the ground, witnessing a fiery drama unfold before my very eyes., The apartment building I lived in was engulfed in flames., The upper half if the building was spewing a cloud of dense black smoke into the sky.,

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