Background statement - Opinions are divided on whether advancing for higher education or applying for a job after high school would be more beneficial school would be more beneficial.school would be more beneficial., Thesis statement - This essay will discuss both sides of this argument, and then I will give my own perspective , Topic sentence view 1 - On the one hand, it is undeniable that both the learners and society are likely to benefit from tertiary education, Supporting idea 1 for view 1 - Firstly, universities offer major-oriented curriculums for students, giving them opportunities to expand their academic knowledge for future use, Supporting detail 1 for view 1 - Therefore, they may increase the probability of accessing well-paid jobs such as doctor, lawyer, or lecturer, Supporting idea 2 for view 1 - Secondly, an elite workforce is essential in adapting to the latest development of technology, Supporting detail 2 for view 1 - Thus, not only will graduates be able to raise their living standards, but they can also contribute to the development of their country., Topic sentence view 2 - On the other hand, there are several reasons why acquiring a job after high school is advantageous., Supporting idea 1 for view 2 - To begin with, an enormous number of bachelor's degree holders are losing their jobs to artisans or other blue-collar workers due to the lack of practical skills or experience., Supporting detail 1 for view 2 - Hence, by joining the workforce early, people can enhance their expertise, and fairly compete against graduates with more academic knowledge., Supporting idea 2 for view 2 - Secondly, getting a job early allows people to become financially independent., Supporting detail 2 for view 2 - Moreover, they may afford to start their own family if they work hard., Conclusion (Summarize 2 sides) - In conclusion, I am convinced that while pursuing a bachelor's degree will pave an easier road to success, it is no longer the only route as working early is also a reasonable option., Conclusion (Restate your opinion) - To the best of my belief, people should be cautious about choosing their future path based on their own desire and the available resources.,

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