When we revise, we look at the meaning of our writing., Think: Does my essay actually say what I want it to say?, Revision can mean ADDING, REMOVING, MOVING, or REWRITING., A — Add something that's missing, R — Remove something unnecessary, M — Move something to a better place, S — Substitute weak words or ideas with stronger ones

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