Too informal or lacks specific detail:   The balloon was blown up for the experiment., The man got over his illness.,  The results of the study got all mixed up., The mob were kicking off during the protest., It was raining cats and dogs., We can't make things better because there's no money., Good managers tell their players the right stuff to do., The tune makes us think of happy stuff., The writer makes the reader want to read on., Martin was a really great guy. , Antibiotics are pills which stop you being ill., Appropriate level of formality and detail: The balloon was inflated for the experiment., The patient recovered from his illness. ,  The results of the study were confused.  , The crowd was very rowdy during the protest.,  It was raining very heavily.  ,   Improvements cannot be introduced due to funding restrictions., Effective managers give clear guidance and instructions to their players., Drugs that are used to kill bacteria are called antibiotics., Martin Luther King was an inspirational and powerful leader., By creating an interesting character, the writer effectively engages his reader., The piece of music evokes positive emotion.,

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