The writer can't provide any supports. - Mars would be a fun place to live., Thesis is two pronged. Writer would need to provide both parts and gather reasons to support both. - My dad is my friend and my mentor., Reasons don't support/match the thesis statement. - My mom is my best friend. 1) Because she is a good cook. 2) Because she dresses well. 3) Because she works hard at her job., Fact not a thesis. - My grandmother is old., Reasons are not parallel. - My mom is my best friend. 1) Because she buys me things. 2) Now that I'm older. 3) When I am at home., Reasons are overlapping - My mom is my best friend. 1) Because she is fun. 2) Because I have a good time with her. 3) Because she listens to me.,

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