(Intro) The map illustrates the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. - (2 maps!) The maps illustrate the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010., (Intro) The river stoke runs from south-west to north-east and a rode is from north to south... - The two maps depict Stokeford village in 1930 and 2010. Overall, the area saw significant change, particularly with housing developments replacing farm land., (Intro) The village of Stokeford have trough many changes. - The maps show how the village of Stokeford went through many changes over an 80-year period, 1930 to 2010., Bridge in the north side is still building in 2010. - (Voice- not active!) The bridge in the north remained in the same place., As a result, trafic system was steadly enhansed over the eighty years. - As a result, the traffic infrastructure was steadily enhanced over the eighty years., However, in 2010, it became an urbanized area. - However, by 2010, it had become an urbanized area., There was gardens with large house in 1930 and they are replaced by retirement home in 2010.  - East of the main road, there used to be gardens surrounding a large house, but these became half the size as the house was converted to a retirement home., One of the more notorious change is the demolition of the farmlands... - One of the most significant changes was the clearing of the farmland., And also on the right above them there is a primary school...Secondly, next to a River Stoke, there were Farmland and shops. - (Use compass points- avoid left/ right/ next to/ avoid informal language/ avoid 'listing' changes. Connect!!) To the north of these was a primary school..., to the east of this school, across the main road, there used to be shops., The large house with gardens area was transformed into a retirement home later and the area shrinked to half its size in 2010. - The large house and garden area was transformed into a retirement house later, and the area shrunk to half its size by 2010., The farmland in the south of the post office... - The farmland to the south of the post office..., 75 words/ 83 words/ 120 words - 140-170 is fine,

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