"The magical view of Monte fugi in Japan" - The Magical View of Mount Fuji in Japan, Do you feel the need of getting in contact with nature without leaving the city. - Do you feel the need to get back to nature without leaving the city?, For example, in the summer it is crowed so I recomed you visit it in the end of the summer it will be enjoynable. - For example, in the summer, it is crowded, so I recommend you visit it at the end, when it will be more enjoyable., Ready to engage yourself to one unforgeteble experience? Many travelers say that not only after they tried had they known what they have been missing. - Ready to engage yourself in one unforgettable experience? Many travelers say that only after they visited did they realise what they had been missing., Although, the place could improve it's accessibility creating others ways to arrive until the top.... - But, its accessibility could be improved, creating other ways to reach the top..., Firstly, the coast of the flights used to be expensive...Secondly, you need pay a tax...Thirdly, ...In conclusion, .... - One thing is, the cost of the flights are a little expensive. Added to that, you need to pay a tax...Another thing....All in all, ..., In the heart of the city, the restaurant nondescript from the outside, it's a intriguing experience. - The question asks for a review of a place of natural beauty, not a restaurant. ( the restaurant is nondescript from the outside; it's an intriguing experience.), It was a moment that I really enjoy and a moment of peaceful, will I go again? Yes, I will not loose the opportunity to ... - It was a moment that I really enjoyed and a moment of peace. Will I go again? Yes, I won't miss/ lose the opportunity to... , Definitily, is my first option on my list and I would love to back again. - Definitely, it is the first option on my list, and I would love to go back again., So, it becomes in a wasting of time. The rest is an experience for everyone. - So, it could waste a bit of time. That aside, it is an experience for everyone., MONTAIN TURIST APRECIATE RECOMEND WONDERFULL - MOUNTAIN / TOURIST / APPRECIATE / RECOMMEND / WONDERFUL, biodiversity country the difficulted to access a moment of peaceful - biodiverse country /  the difficulty to access / a moment of peace,

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