Informal phrases which lack precision. - The results were kind of surprising, and a new method worked way better than the old one., First-person pronoun, emotive and subjective language. - I believe that the policy is unfair and should be changed immediately. , Emotive exaggeration and lacks analytical tone. - The devastating effects of the legislation ruined countless lives and caused unimaginable suffering. , Absolute language lacks nuance and evidence. - Social media always manipulates people and makes them believe fake news. , Vague transitions. Lacks academic signposting. - The study looked at three things. Then it talked about some results. Finally, it said what might happen next. , Contractions resulting in an informal tone. - The experiment didn't go as planned, but it's still useful for future research. , Vague nouns and unclear purpose. - Stuff was collected from different places and analysed to see what was going on. , Weak connective (but), could be improved with 'however' or 'nevertheless'. - The results were interesting, but the sample size was small. , Digit under 10 used numerically. - 5 participants dropped out of the study due to illness, Wordy phrasing. Could be more concise. - Due to the fact that the experiement was conducted in a laboratory setting, it can be said that the results are somewhat reliable. ,

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