Bullying is a growing problem in Australian schools that has serious effects on young people., Topic sentence, Firstly, bullying can have negative impacts on the victim's academic performance., Problem 1, Students that are victims of bullying may stop coming to classes and they may have difficulty focussing on their school work., Supporting sentence 1, Secondly, bullying can be harmful for the victim’s mental health., Problem 2, Victims of bullying experience greater rates of depression, anxiety, anger and stress that can lead to long-term struggles with mental health., Supporting sentence 2, Lastly, bullying also has negative impacts on the young people who are doing the bullying., Problem 3 (optional), Children who are bullies are at greater risk of becoming criminals and having depression later in life., Supporting sentence 3 (optional), The effects of bullying can be serious and schools have a responsibility to reduce bullying and protect all their students., Concluding sentence.

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