You have not addressed the question/title - Highlight and define key words in your assignment brief before researching the topic, Your work lacks criticality - Create a bank of critical language to help with future assignments, There are problems with referencing - Review the library guides on referencing, You should review your structure - Use an outline to organise your ideas during planning, This point lacks development - Find a descriptive passage in your work and practise adding evaluation, Your style is not academic - Read widely to find diverse examples of academic style, Your argument is lacking/unclear - Practise writing a clear statement of argument (thesis statement) to guide your argument., Review your use of sources - Check your citations, reference list & bibliography for errors, Are all your points relevant? - Continually refer to you thesis statement when writing to prevent tangents or irrelevance., Adequate. - Ask for clarification or more specific feedback, 53% - Review the marking criteria to understand your grade, Too much use of quotation. - Book a 1:1 with your SASA to discuss paraphrasing, summarising and synthesis,

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