Background statement/ Paraphrase the topic - It is true that several people put extra effort into study and work than others., Thesis statement/ Essay outline - However, working hard all the time is not a positive thing for our lives, and it can bring negative consequences., BODY PARAGRAPH 1 (Question 1)  Topic sentence: - People are motivated to work hard for two main reasons., Supporting idea 1: - To begin with, some people work extra shifts to increase their income., Supporting details 1 - They feel that by earning more money, they will be able to provide comfort for themselves and their families., Supporting idea 2: - Furthermore, newly hired employees work long hours in order to meet the employer's goals and keep their jobs. , Supporting details 2 - They are concerned that if they do not meet the target, their company will replace them with more capable employees.,

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