Descriptive: You provided a detailed description of the characters in this book report. I suggest that in the second draft you give more detailed summary of the plot., Your model of the park is very creative. The material you used to represent the grass looks great. But I think about making the pond bigger., You wrote a really good story and the characters all seems very real. One area you need to work on is verb tenses. When we tell a story, we use verbs in the past. Please revise your use of verb tenses., You made really good sentences here with proper tenses. However, you need to work more on the use of preposition. Make sure you know when to use in and on when talking about places and time., You essay is really compact and full of invaluable moral aspects. Perhaps you need to make thorough explanation on some supporting ideas so that the main ideas are elaborated delivered., Evaluative: Good job!, 95! Well done!, Good job! You did a really nice job on this report. This is your best work so far this year. Keep up the good work!, You nailed the questions very good. All the aspects of the sentences are correctly placed!, Nice job here! You provided a really good story with various characters! I really like the story!,

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