Looking out of the window, he stared blankly into the distance till a figure in his neighbour's unit caught his attention. , "Didn't Mr. Wong's family leave for a holiday yesterday? Why is there a shadow in the living room?" the boy thought., Feeling alarmed, he peeked out from behind the window and squinted to get a clear look., Then, he saw the figure moving around the room quickly and putting things into a bag. , That could not possibly be Mr. Wong!, Swiftly, I pried open the door's lock and slid into the house., With stealthy movements, I made my way to the bedroom and started ransacking for valuables., Searching high and low, I stashed all the valuables into my duffel bag.,

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