Dialogue : "We have some great specials tonight," the waitress explained., "Would you pass me the salt please?" my mom asked., "It was such a great party! Thanks for inviting me," Caren said., "What happened to the hall pass?" she inquired. , Imagery : The night was black as ever, but bright stars lit up the sky in beautiful and varied constellations which were sprinkled across the astronomical landscape., The lemonade was tart and cold, tingling on my tongue., The aroma of freshly baked chocolate cookies welcomed her into the kitchen., The sky was as blue as the ocean and the clouds sailed across it like white boats., Inner Thinking : I don't want to be late again. The last time I got a warning and I don't want detention. , Sometimes I'm not sure if I like the pizza or if I actually hate it. , I couldn't believe how rude she was acting. , I was so exhausted and not in the mood to do math. , Figurative Language : I was as busy as a bee before the party., Bud thought Miss Hill had bit the dust but she got married and moved away., I was so hungry I could eat five whole pizzas., SHH SHH SHH went the train as it pulled away. , Flashback : I can still remember how scared I felt when the robbers broke inside my house. Even thought it was 5 years ago I can still picture the night. , That day, ten years ago now, was the best of my life. I was so surprised and I had no idea they had thrown me a surprise party. , I can still hear the sound of my grandfather's voice although he passed away several years ago. , It was a typical Tuesday afternoon in 2001 when that dog viciously attacked me out of nowhere. ,

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