Yesterday, me and my sister goed to the park. We bringed a frisbee and played in the grass. After that, we eated sandwiches and drinked juice. The weather was really nice and we enjoyed our time outdoor. - Yesterday, my sister and I went to the park. We (had) brought a frisbee and (we) played in the grass. After that, we ate sandwiches and drank juice. The weather was really nice, and we enjoyed our time outdoors., At the school's science fair, I seed many interesting experiments. One student showed a volcano that erupted with baking soda and vinegar. Another student demonstrated how to make a simple electric circut. I also watch a presentation about space travel. - At the school's science fair, I saw many interesting experiments. One student showed a volcano that erupted with baking soda and vinegar. Another student demonstrated how to make a simple electric circuit. I also watched a presentation about space travel., During my vacation, I visited three different cities. First, I flied to New York City. Then, I taked a train to Washington D.C. Finally, I drived to Philadelphia. Each city had its own unique attractions and I had a lot of fun. - During my vacation, I visited three different cities. First, I flew to New York City. Then, I took a train to Washington D.C. Finally, I drove to Philadelphia. Each city had its own unique attractions, and I had a lot of fun., Last night, I watched a documentary film about oceans. It was very informative and learnful. I saw beautiful footage of marine animals and corals. The narrator explained the impact of pollution and climate change on the ocean. - Last night, I watched a documentary film about oceans. It was very informative and educational. I saw beautiful footage of marine animals and corals. The narrator explained the impact of pollution and climate change on the ocean., I'm going to have a busy weekend. Tomorrow, I will goes to the gym in the morning. Then, I meets my friend for lunch. In the evening, I'm going to a concert with my sister. On Sunday, I will studied for my upcoming exams. It's going to be a packed weekend! - I'm going to have a busy weekend. Tomorrow, I will go to the gym in the morning. Then, I will meet my friend for lunch. In the evening, I'm going to a concert with my sister. On Sunday, I will study for my upcoming exams. It's going to be a packed weekend!,
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