Narrative voice - I (first) you (second) he (third), Dialogue - Speech. Shows the character, adds drama, Opening. How? - Description? Dialogue? action? What is the effect?, End - How does the extract end?, Paragraph lengths - How long are the paragraphs? Any very short?, Focus of the paragraphs - Where is the focus? does it shift? What effect?, Foreshadowing - Is there a hint to future events? Why?, Pathetic Fallacy - Does the weather/nature reflect the mood?, Sentence lengths - Short or long? why?,

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