Typical Lead, It was a day at the end of June. My mom, dad, brother, and I were at our camp on Rangeley Lake. We arrived the night before at 10:00, so it was dark when we got there and unpacked. We went straight to bed., Action Lead - The main character doing something, I gulped my milk, pushed away from the table and bolted out of the kitchen slamming the screen door behind me. I ran to our dock as fast as my legs could carry me. My feet pounded on the old wood, hurrying me towards my dad’s voice., Dialogue Lead - The main character or others speaking, “Scott! Get down here, on the double!” Dad yelled. His voice sounded far away. , Reaction Lead - The main character thinking (your thoughts), I couldn’t imagine why my father was hollering for me at 7:00 in the morning. I thought fast about what I might have done to get him so riled. Had he found out about the way I talked to my mother the night before, when we got to camp and she asked me to help unpack the car? Did he discover the fishing reel I broke last week?, Description Lead -, A breeze pushed at the pines outside the window that cast patterns on the wall beside my bunk. The only sound was a birdcall--it was June, too early for out-of-state jetskiers. The sun and my relief that the school year was over filled our camp with calmness..

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