to tame the unforgiving land, personification, a hive of activity, metaphor, "You can't look after a girl, Jack". Her father fought back "she's my child..", pace of dialogue, muttering dire warnings, emotive language (makes us feel dread), he waited grimly, foreshadowing, the girl's eyes shone, emotive language (creates empathy), the unspoken tragedy, emotive language (pathos), "he's under my feet..." , "they could do worse, couldn't they?", conversational tone

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