The clock on the wall reads 03:07, Most people would be asleep., Someone is up in the early hours., The clock could be wrong., The night was unnaturally still and empty, Something unnatural has caused the night to be still and empty., Nothing much was going on., There was no wind., The woman wore a coat that was two sizes too big., The character is female., The character's coat is too big., It's not her coat., Author's Reason, The author is suggesting we consider why the character would wear such a coat., By using the adverb “unnaturally”, the author could be predicting a disturbing reason for the stillness of the night to create interest and tension., By giving a precise time, the author is using exact detail to create atmosphere or mood.

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