Show, Don't Tell, Her hands shook as she stepped onto the first stair., The girl stared at the bright world with her mouth wide open., She looked over her shoulder again and again as she climbed., Tears filled her eyes when she looked back at her village., Simile, The wall was as tall as a mountain., Her scarf floated like a flag in the wind., The sunlight shone like gold., The staircase stretched upward like a giant snake., Personification, The wind played with her scarf., The wall stood watching over the village., The sunlight welcomed the girl., The shadows hid the village., Powerful Adjectives, Ancient staircase, Brilliant light, Gentle breeze, Smooth stone wall, Dialogue, "Why is there a wall?" she asked., "Do not go beyond it, or you will die.", "That's just the way the sky looks.", "It must be there for a reason.", Suspense, She placed one foot on the first step., Finally, she reached the top., Then she noticed something strange., Slowly, she began to understand., Interesting Verbs, streamed, gasped, sparkled, wandered

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