Narrative voice, I (first) you (second) he (third), Dialogue, Shows the character, adds drama, Opening. How?, Description? Dialogue? action? What is the effect?, End, How does the extract end?, Paragraph lengths, How long are the paragraphs? Any very short?, Focus of the paragraphs, Where is the focus? does it shift? What effect?, Foreshadowing, Is there a hint to future events? Why?, Pathetic Fallacy, Does the weather/nature reflect the mood?, Sentence lengths, Short or long? why?.

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