Weak Feedback:, Fix your grammar., Okay Feedback:, Check your verb tenses. Some sentences switch from past to present, Glow & Grow Feedback:, Your ideas are clear and interesting. Check sentences 3–4—keep the verbs in past tense to make the narrative flow smoothly, TAG Feedback:, I like how detailed your story is. Could you look at sentences 3–4? The tense changes there. Try using past tense for all the verbs so the story stays consistent..

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