"They stood for a moment staring at the sea, embraced quickly, and scampered down the few steps onto the sand.", Tone and mood, “Feeling nothing further, she resumed her lurching stroke. The fish smelled her now.”, Shift in focus, “The fish closed on the woman and hurtled past, a dozen feet to the side and six feet below the surface.”, Tension, "Pain and panic struck together.", Short sentence., “First a swim,” said the woman. “You go ahead. I’ll wait for you here.”, Dialogue, "A hundred yards offshore, a fish sensed a change in the sea's rhythm. It did not see the woman, nor yet did it smell her.", Dramatic irony, "For the first time, the woman felt fear. Adrenaline shot through her.", Pace, "The front door to the house opened, and a man and a woman stepped out onto the wooden porch.", Domestic opening.

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