Paragraph 1 -- General Introduction: The topic of sportspeople's earnings is one which often causes a great deal of discussion, especially in newspapers and on the television. Many people have strong feelings on the subject, and so do I., Paragraph 2 -- An argument for or against, possibly from your own experience: First of all, I'd like to say that playing sport for a living is not essential to society. Nurses do an essential job but they earn very. little compared to many sportspeople. Also, a football player, for example, will only be playing for a few hours a day while a nurse could work up to twelve hours a day., Paragraph 3 -- another argument either for or against: On the other hand, it is important to say that a sportsperson's career does not last very long and he or she will only earn a high salary for a limited period of time - possibly possibly as little as ten years. It is also the case that injury can cut short a career. Therefore it is reasonable that they receive higher than normal salaries., Paragraph 4 -- the Conclusion and your personal opinion: To sum up, I agree that sometimes sportspeople are paid too much. However, perhaps the problem is really that people in more important jobs are paid too little.,

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