1) Which of the following is the best way to combine sentences 13 and 14? a) Allison was accepted into the training program and Allison began preparing for her mission, training both physically and mentally. b) Allison was accepted into the training program, so she began preparing for her mission both physically and mentally. c) Allison was accepted into the training program and began preparing for the mission, she was training both physically and mentally. d) Allison was accepted into the training program and began preparing for the mission and she training both physically and mentally. 2) What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9? a) Bottled water may be attractively packaged, but it is simply processed tap water. b) Bottled water is simply processed tap water, because it is attractively packaged. c) Bottled water may be attractively packaged, so it is simply processed tap water. d) Bottled water is attractively packaged, it is simply processed tap water. 3) What is the best way to rewrite sentence 10? a) I finally worked up the courage, my initial splash instantly put all my worries to rest, the experience was invigorating. b) I finally worked up the courage, and my initial splash instantly put all my worries to rest. The experience was invigorating. c) I finally worked up the courage. My initial splash instantly put all my worries to rest, the experience was invigorating. d) I finally worked up the courage, and my initial splash, instantly, put all my worries to rest and the experience was invigorating. 4) What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9? a) My sister will not let me play video games, nor will she let me watch my, favorite show but she will allow me to do my homework. b) My sister will not let me play video games or watch my favorite show, so she will allow me to do my homework. c) My sister will not let me play video games or watch my favorite show, she will allow me to do my homework. d) My sister will not let me play video games or watch my favorite show, but she will allow me to do my homework. 5) What is the correct way to write sentence 9? a) He said it was faster than trying to decode my texts, but I didn’t understand what he meant until a few days later. b) He said it was faster than trying to decode my texts, I didn’t understand what he meant until a few days later. c) He said it was faster than trying to decode my texts. Which I didn’t understand what he meant until a few days later. d) He said it was faster than trying to decode my texts, and I didn’t understand. What he meant until a few days later.

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