1) Reese wants to improve the clarity of sentence 12. How should sentence 12 be revised? a) Running along the brain’s blood vessels, the team determined is a fluid that carries waste away from the brain. b) The team determined that fluid running along the brain’s blood vessels carries waste away from the brain. c) Waste by a fluid that is running along the brain’s blood vessels is carried away from the brain, the team determined. d) Along the side of the brain’s blood vessels is a fluid, the team determined, and this carries away from the brain waste. 2) What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9? a) Early attempts to provide provisions to troops left them weakened and troops were also left malnourished and susceptible to disease, which could be fatal. b) Early attempts to provide provisions to troops left them weakened, malnourished, and susceptible to disease, which could be fatal. c) Early attempts to provide provisions to troops left them weakened, troops were also left malnourished and susceptible to disease, which could be fatal. d) Early attempts to provide provisions to troops left them weakened, and were also malnourished and susceptible to disease, which could be fatal. 3) What is the correct way to write sentence 26? a) Freeze drying is frequently used in preserving coffee and making it “instant.” b) Making it “instant,” freeze drying is frequently used in preserving coffee. c) Frequently used in preserving coffee is freeze drying and it makes it “instant.” d) Preserving coffee and making it “instant,” freeze drying is frequently used. 4) What is the most effective way to revise sentence 21? a) Also consider that many bottles are discarded into landfills, where the bottles release chemicals as they decompose over hundreds of years. b) These bottles, decomposing over hundreds of years, should also be considered to release chemicals where they have been discarded into landfills. c) Also consider that landfills are filled with released chemicals, where they decompose many discarded bottles over hundreds of years. d) Over hundreds of years, landfills are filled with many bottles, and it should also be considered that the bottles decompose and release chemicals. 5) What is the most effective way to combine sentences 3 and 4? a) But online networking, which is very popular with teens today, promotes short, superficial connections. b) But online networking promotes short, superficial connections, it is very popular with teens today. c) But online networking that promotes short, superficial connections, it is very popular with teens today. d) But online networking promotes short, superficial connections with teens today, which it is very popular

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