Your writing needs to be more academic: too casual/too informal, need more citations, demonstrate more criticality, claims are too certain & lacking evidence, Is this relevant?: you are going off topic, you are not answering the essay title, Your paragraphs . . . : are too long/short, lack depth/examples, have too many merging ideas, lack a clear focus,

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