Topic Sentence - In the novel, ‘Boy Overboard’, written by Morris Gleitzman, the Taliban persecuted woment and girls with unfair laws and harsh punishments., Evidence (1st) - This is shown, when Jamal states, “Bibi must have forgotten that girls aren’t allow to leave the house without a male escort” (pg 4)., Explanation (1st)  - This quote suggests that women and girls are being persecuted by Taliban’s unfair laws. These laws are unfair as they only target the female population in Afghanistan., Evidence - In addition, in Chapter 12 when Jamal thinks, “The government can’t do this. They can’t kill people for being teachers” (pg 63)., Explanation - This quote illustrates that women are being killed by the Taliban for breaking unfair laws that discriminate against female human rights to work and learn., Link Sentence - Therefore, from the evidence given women and girls were persecuted unfairly by the Taliban’s laws and punishments in Afghanistan.,

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