Good: Topic: My grandpa, a Vietnam War Veteran, is truly a person I admire. Conclusion: My grandpa truly is a hero to me., Topic: The Main Street Grill has the best burgers in town! Conclusion: If you're looking for a delicious burger, you might want to try the Main Street Grill., Small Detail: Topic: Although it's not always fun, doing chores is a way I can help my family. Conclusion: Chores are really boring., Topic: We like to watch movies, read, and play video games in our spare time. Conclusion: It's always fun to read a new book., Introduced a New Idea: Topic: I play soccer, see my friends, and spend time with my family on the weekend. Conclusion: Sometimes I go to the park too., Topic: Even though I am four years older than my sister, we are very close. Conclusion: My brother and I are close too., Too Similar to the Topic Sentence: Topic: The Natural History Museum has a number of interesting exhibits you'll want to see. Conclusion: The Natural History Museum is an interesting place to visit., Topic: Mr. Miller, our principal, is one of the friendliest people I know. Conclusion: Mr. Miller is very friendly.,

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