Word Choice - 'Seagull squawked' - wc - Suggests a high pitch, loud and irritating sound - effective as the seagull is presented as annoying and distracting, writer can't escape the noise. , , Imagery - 'the golden game' - metaphor - suggests the best, valuable, coming first - effective as it highlights how much the writer enjoyed the game, it was the best thing they had seen in a long time., Sentence Structure - lines 16-17 - list. - emphasises the number of bad things the writer had to do at the shop - effective as highlights their frustration at shopping., Link - - 'this idea' - refers back - 'will change peoples' lives' links forwards.,

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