Positive - Your report is very well-organized, and you did a great job with the data presentation in your results section. I can clearly see the trends in plant growth across different soil types., Actionable - In your conclusion, try to go beyond simply summarizing the results. Include a statement on whether your data supports or challenges your hypothesis and provide some reasoning behind the observed outcomes. For example, consider explaining why loamy soil might promote better growth. You could mention factors like nutrient balance and water retention., Timely - Feedback should be provided shortly after submission, ideally within a week, to give the student ample time to incoporate these suggestions in future lab reports or revisions., Specific - In your conclusion, explicitly connect your findings back to your hypothesis, "I hypothesized that loamy soil would promote the most growth because of its balanced properties. The results support this hypothesis as plants in loamy soil had the highest growth.". You might also want to discuss any unexpected findings like if clay soil performed better than anticipated and suggest a possible explanation.,

Feedback Using the PATS Model

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