Dear Mr, Mrs director of ILSC Language School. - To: Director, ILSC Adelaide., This proposal is sending to help ILSC's students to feel at home and enjoy this adventure. Also, to mention the problems that some students are experiencing and... - This proposal outlines the problems that many ILSC's students have after their arrival in Adelaide and offers some suggestions to make their stay here more comfortable and rewarding., (Opening sentence) Most of the students, who arrive to Adelaide to seek a real chance to improve their english skills, start feeling lonelyness, hopeless or depression. - Introduction: Most of the students who arrive in Adelaide to seek a real chance to improve their English skills start feeling loneliness, hopelessness or depression. , (Opening sentence) Getting use to living in a new country take time and can be scary; for that having a community of people who lived the same experience...is the main of this proposal. - Getting used to living in a new country takes time and can be scary; for this reason, having community support from people who have lived the same experience...is essential. This proposal will offer suggestions to the problems these students face., Options Nowadays, some international students between 18-30 year old, are faceing economics issuess because for them are difficult to.... - Nowadays, some international students between 18-30 years old are facing financial issues because for them, it is difficult to..., For me, is so important to keep a real and personal conextion with the new students not is enough just.. - It is essential to keep a real, personal connection with the new students, and it is not enough just to..., (Conclusion) In my opinion, giving them support when they needed it's the best idea, also it is hard to find... - In my opinion, giving them support when they need it is the best idea; also, it is hard to find..., in summarise I think the best option is try to include this new people in the society... - I therefore propose that the best option is to try to include these new people in society..., dissapointed - disappointed, suggest= verb. Noun = - suggestion o0o, logist - logistics o0o, beneficial = adj. Noun = - benefits 0oo,

Practice Writing: Proposal Error Correction

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