Introduction - positive points - Smartphones can be wonderful devices with many advantages,, Introduction - negative points - but there are also significant downsides to owning one., Topic and controlling idea - There are many positive reasons to own a smartphone., Topic sentence - benefit 1 - The first advantage is convenience., Reason 1 - Fact - Because the phones are mini computers that can connect with the internet, you can access information wherever you go. , Example 1 - You can check weather, book restaurants, find timetables and use maps while you are out of your house., Topic sentence - benefit 2 - Furthermore, smartphones can be used for entertainment., Reason 2 - Fact - Not only can smartphones be used to watch TV and listen to music, but there are also thousands of free games that can be downloaded as apps and played anywhere. , Example 2 - Some games, such as Pokemon Go and Angry Birds can only be used on a phone., Topic sentence - benefit 3 + stress - Most importantly, smartphones make keeping in touch with people so much easier., Example 3 - You can call, text or message your friends and family as well as sending them photos, recording videos and responding to them via social media., Concluding sentence - You can call, text or message your friends and family as well as sending them Smartphones make keeping in contact with people who are far away simpler., Conclusion - positive points - To sum up, smartphones are useful and fun,, Conclusion - negative points - but there are drawbacks which people should be aware of.,

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